Hello, I want to post my NV

What’s up guys
have wanted to publish a novel for a long time that has been in my head but due to different circumstances I have not been able to until now

I am a big fan of this page and the NVs that encouraged me to make my own
My mother tongue is Spanish so I included a translation within the NV
I am new to this and I would greatly appreciate your comments and advice that you can give me to improve and continue with this project that I am loving.